I had the idea for this poem on the bus on my way to work a year and a half ago. I was so engrossed in writing it that I left my phone on the bus and never got it back.
Dad has always written, some of his poems and short stories have been published and I have always thought there were great. We talk a lot about poets and the way they write. One of our favourite kinds of poems is ‘list poems’, such as ‘love is’ by Adrian Henri. ‘I want to paint’, by the same author, is my favourite poem of all time. Both are from ‘The Mersey Sound‘ supposedly one the most influential books of British Poetry since 1945.
So here is my little effort:
List Poem For Dad
Dippy eggs. No escapes
The bus to Boro town
“cleaning the kitchen floor’
making pasta
breath dragons in the cold
CND. The Ambulance drivers.
Pole Tax and the miners marches
Maggie aggie aggie out out out
Resipol
North York Moors
Lairns table and the
stag so close we could see him breathe
South Bank Concert
Circular breathing
Mice and wizards
2 am pasta and the last tube home
coffee/tobacco/sweat/warm(brown)wool
badteeth wolfsgrin
limegreen cardigan and a terrible shirt
long elegant yellowstained fingers
that shake
cold on nape of small neck
gesticulating
Poet
Communist
Revolutionary
Anarchist
Capitalist (Bastard)
Ryde-Ventnor in 20 minutes
(‘don’t tell your mother’)
The words ‘fuck off’ as adjective
Mingus/Davis/Frizell
Springbean and Van (the man)
inlove with the voices of
michelleshocked/chrissiehynde/rickieleejones
and
laurieanderson
manic
depressive
red leopard print tights then
three months in bed
wierdinstrumentalmusicfromabovethearcticcircle
japanese skwaking women
eels/pavement/REM
Cohen/Dylan/Reed/Cale
(razor blades with that?)
The three times I’ve seen you cry
(neither tarchovsky nor dirty dancing count)
Ferlingetti/Buckowski
Patten/Henri(thanks Adrian)/McGough
TS Elliot/Ted Hughes/Spenser/Milton
Auster/TH White/CS Lewis
A thousand other voices from my childhood
all in your rumbling base tone
boxing day blues band
burned fingers on drunken fry up
Feckless Mansell Bastard Saturday mornings
birthday obstacle courses
cause you’re my
Guru. Sensei
(anti) Hero
Dad/john/’your father’/armstrong
and I’m
petal(dust)/froglet/light-of-your-life/daughter
always

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Like the poem Kayt! Strong flavour of AE Housman, yet still obviously original. It says a lot.
Thanks Jim!
[blushes]
I’m glad you liked it. I’m now devouring all the Housman I can find! I can see why you like him
Neko
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